Extend the story. If you were Edward Bloor, the author, what would you include in a sequel of Tangerine. Think about what you wish the author had told you happened at the end of the story.
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What I wish EDWARD BLOOR added to the story is if paul plays Wareagles agian and how paul did at school.
The epilouge of tangerine would go like this. Now that Dad will spend more time with Paul, I think that he will abandone the Erik Fisher football dream, and create a Paul Fisher soccer dream and create a Paul Fisher scholarship offers file on his computer. Then Paul will make the all county soccer team and hes gona become the greatest soccer player.(He will even become better than Maya.) After he becomes a legend at soccer, he becomes a well educated person, after he swithches back to tangerine. In the end, Paul becomes a succussful athelete millionare.
I think Edward should include a story following Paul's soccer dream and give his team a rival soccer team. The rival soccer team would probably have a couple players who do something bad...
If he were to continue with the book i would have wished that he tells us what happens to Eric and Arther.I also wish he would have told us about Pauls new school and whether he likes it or not.
I would have written in the sequel about how his life at st. andrews is so much differnet and that maybe he went back to tangerine then got to take over the tangerine groves because that is what it had said in luis's will. I would have gone into so much depth more than the arthur. Plus a baby could write a better ending than him.
IF I WROTE TH MISSING PEICES OR WHAT WOULD HAPPEN NEXT, IS I WOULD SAY THAT SOMETHING HAD WENT WRONG WITH ERIKS EYES, AND THAT PAUL HAS SOMETHING TO DO WITH IT AND THAT ERIKS FOOTBALL DREAM HAS STARTED TO FADE AWAY SLOWLEY LIKE HOW HE ISNT GETTING SCHOLAR SHIPS AND OTHER THINGS HE WANT IN LIFE. AND PAUL ON THE OTHER HAND WOULD GET ALMOST ABOUT EVERYTHING THAT HE WANTS IN LIFE..:
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What I wish EDWARD BLOOR added to the story is if paul plays Wareagles agian and how paul did at school.
The epilouge of tangerine would go like this. Now that Dad will spend more time with Paul, I think that he will abandone the Erik Fisher football dream, and create a Paul Fisher soccer dream and create a Paul Fisher scholarship offers file on his computer. Then Paul will make the all county soccer team and hes gona become the greatest soccer player.(He will even become better than Maya.) After he becomes a legend at soccer, he becomes a well educated person, after he swithches back to tangerine. In the end, Paul becomes a succussful athelete millionare.
In a sequel to Tangerine,I think the author should include; what happens to Erik, Arthur, and Paul's middle school soccer career.
I agree with JMangubat about the epilouge of Tangerine:)
Hey PJ your right. They should include what happens Erik and Paul and what happens at the new private school. Maybe it would be beter than this book.
I think Edward should include a story following Paul's soccer dream and give his team a rival soccer team. The rival soccer team would probably have a couple players who do something bad...
I wish that Edward Bloor would have made Erik go to military school, and tell what happened to him in the military school.
If he were to continue with the book i would have wished that he tells us what happens to Eric and Arther.I also wish he would have told us about Pauls new school and whether he likes it or not.
I would have written in the sequel about how his life at st. andrews is so much differnet and that maybe he went back to tangerine then got to take over the tangerine groves because that is what it had said in luis's will. I would have gone into so much depth more than the arthur. Plus a baby could write a better ending than him.
IF I WROTE TH MISSING PEICES OR WHAT WOULD HAPPEN NEXT, IS I WOULD SAY THAT SOMETHING HAD WENT WRONG WITH ERIKS EYES, AND THAT PAUL HAS SOMETHING TO DO WITH IT AND THAT ERIKS FOOTBALL DREAM HAS STARTED TO FADE AWAY SLOWLEY LIKE HOW HE ISNT GETTING SCHOLAR SHIPS AND OTHER THINGS HE WANT IN LIFE. AND PAUL ON THE OTHER HAND WOULD GET ALMOST ABOUT EVERYTHING THAT HE WANTS IN LIFE..:
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